We Will

miinah-a-pun · 12-10-2013, 08:01 AM

its very honest........any kind of feed back is appreciated

We will meet.....
we will say the world that we are together............
we will kiss...........
questioning every minute
will it be the same forever.............

days and a year will pass by..............
but we will keep rollin'
saying-ohh! we are just good friends
saying-ohh! we are meant for each other............
saying-i miss you in the midnights................
questioning every minute
questioning every hour...........
asking those lifeless stones
to lead us back to our own home.................
where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ...
where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ...
where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ...
where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ...
and we will tell the world WE WILL be together forever.........................

**Scarlett O'Hara** · 12-19-2013, 11:37 PM

Boring. Words are to simple. Doesn't show much emotion. It's like something you'd sing at the football.

Taxman · 12-24-2013, 06:06 AM

Simple words may work all right with good melody. Especially in pop music. So write what you want.

12-10-2013, 08:01 AM	#1 (permalink)
miinah-a-pun Groupie Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: POKHARA, NEPAL Posts: 40	We Will its very honest........any kind of feed back is appreciated We will meet..... we will say the world that we are together............ we will kiss........... questioning every minute will it be the same forever............. days and a year will pass by.............. but we will keep rollin' saying-ohh! we are just good friends saying-ohh! we are meant for each other............ saying-i miss you in the midnights................ questioning every minute questioning every hour........... asking those lifeless stones to lead us back to our own home................. where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ... where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ... where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ... where jealousy fades away on its own............................................... ... and we will tell the world WE WILL be together forever.........................

12-19-2013, 11:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
Scarlett O'Hara Make it so Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 6,181	Boring. Words are to simple. Doesn't show much emotion. It's like something you'd sing at the football. __________________ "Elph is truly an enfant terrible of the forum, bless and curse him" - Marie, Queen of Thots

12-24-2013, 06:06 AM	#3 (permalink)
Taxman watching the wheels Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Finland Posts: 470	Simple words may work all right with good melody. Especially in pop music. So write what you want.