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Old 02-07-2014, 01:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Red face Brando's Songwriting/Composition-- Beautiful World

Hello everyone! Sorry if you're seeing me around all over the place on Music Banter.. I'm literally having a music craze at the moment. I'll start off by just sharing one of the songs that I've written, and I'll start posting more if people would like to read/hear some more of it

So my first song is called "Beautiful World". The meaning is very intricate, but open to interpretation:


Walkin' slowly day by day
Searchin' the crowd for a familiar face
I- I can't stop pretending that, someday you'll be mine



Beautiful world, won't you pass this along?
My love song sings, bring me where it belongs
"Baby please, please take me away.. away to your heart, you stole my soul today"



Every time I look into your eyes
You- you paralyze me, you're tantalizing
So I.. I follow through to where you're at
Hopin' you'll look back



Beautiful world, won't you pass this along?
My love song sings, bring me where it belongs
"Baby please, please take me away.. away to your heart, you stole my soul today"



When you look this way, I can see again
Will you call my name, I can be your friend
If you touch me, I will fall
But the taste of your lips will guide me through it all


Sentimental feelings can be neat
But I.. I'm waiting for the day we meet, because
Shooting stars don't mean a thing
It's gonna have to be me


Beautiful world, won't you pass this along?
My love song sings, bring me where it belongs
"Baby please, please take me away.. away to your heart, you stole my soul today"



When you look this way, I can see again
Will you call my name, I can be your friend
If you touch me, I will fall
But the taste of your lips will guide me through it all

And one more last final chorus

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Thank you all for taking time to read my work. I also have these lyrics with music as well if anyone would care to listen.. here is my soundcloud link:
https://soundcloud.com/brando_music-1/beautiful-world

Last edited by Brando_Music; 03-07-2014 at 01:22 PM.
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