probably the worst song ever written

anticipation · 06-24-2005, 06:54 PM

with the cheeseburger movie, that movie had some kickass songs

anticipation · 06-27-2005, 12:59 PM

OMG i took a personality test and look what it said

messy, disorganized, social, tough, outgoing, rarely worries, self revealing, open, risk taker, likes the unknown, likes large parties, makes friends easily, likes to stand out, likes to make fun of people, reckless, optimistic, positive, strong, does not like to be alone, ambivalent about chaos, abstract, impractical, not good at saving money, fearless, trusting, thrill seeker, not rule conscious, enjoys leadership, strange, loves food, abstract, rarely irritated, anti-authority, attracted to the counter culture

Supreme_Being · 07-03-2005, 05:24 AM

that song needs some work
it terrible man, must consider doing a collabo with Bizaare of D-12 or Afro Man

nod · 07-22-2005, 09:13 PM

well its better than. I'll sing you a song it aint very long its all about a big murder an old bull dog jumped a bullfrog and the story dont go no further. And remember you eat to live not live to eat

TheBig3 · 07-23-2005, 05:35 AM

well it has potential. You need to realise that rhyming (especially monosylabic words like you did here) can trivialize a song immensly, and with an already trivial subject matter, you don't want that.

Raindogs Recommendation: Take the rhymes out and make this a 12 bar blues song. Try to detail that hard decision between choosing food or a woman. Or make him long for food when he's with the woman. Then my fiend, you have a song.

Lewiscode · 07-23-2005, 09:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Gentleman Johnny

with the cheeseburger movie, that movie had some kickass songs

Are you refering to Super Size Me? Yeah it was a good movie the director ,Morgan Spurlock, was a show on FX called 30 days which is just as good as the movie only about more things and in bite size hour long portions.

Also your song is nice sounds like it'd make a nice comedy song.

HighHopes · 08-01-2005, 05:36 PM

I bet you are fat. All fat people are in denial..are you a closet fatty? The song was good like..I've written a similar number myself about getting wasted

groovalistikmusic · 08-08-2005, 04:27 PM

it's coll

Skuroccer9 · 08-08-2005, 05:02 PM

That was HORRRIBLE. But somehow it was still good. It's like a bad movie, so bad its funny. Except in the form of a song. Kinda like weird Al songs. Keep em coming.

07-23-2005, 05:35 AM	#15 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	well it has potential. You need to realise that rhyming (especially monosylabic words like you did here) can trivialize a song immensly, and with an already trivial subject matter, you don't want that. Raindogs Recommendation: Take the rhymes out and make this a 12 bar blues song. Try to detail that hard decision between choosing food or a woman. Or make him long for food when he's with the woman. Then my fiend, you have a song. __________________ I've moved to a new address

08-08-2005, 05:02 PM	#19 (permalink)
Skuroccer9 Groupie Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: New Jersey Posts: 7	Oh god.... That was HORRRIBLE. But somehow it was still good. It's like a bad movie, so bad its funny. Except in the form of a song. Kinda like weird Al songs. Keep em coming.

06-24-2005, 06:54 PM	#11 (permalink)
anticipation Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 3,565	with the cheeseburger movie, that movie had some kickass songs

06-27-2005, 12:59 PM	#12 (permalink)
anticipation Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 3,565	OMG i took a personality test and look what it said messy, disorganized, social, tough, outgoing, rarely worries, self revealing, open, risk taker, likes the unknown, likes large parties, makes friends easily, likes to stand out, likes to make fun of people, reckless, optimistic, positive, strong, does not like to be alone, ambivalent about chaos, abstract, impractical, not good at saving money, fearless, trusting, thrill seeker, not rule conscious, enjoys leadership, strange, loves food, abstract, rarely irritated, anti-authority, attracted to the counter culture

07-03-2005, 05:24 AM	#13 (permalink)
Supreme_Being Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 7	that song needs some work it terrible man, must consider doing a collabo with Bizaare of D-12 or Afro Man

07-22-2005, 09:13 PM	#14 (permalink)
nod Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: in the styx Posts: 5	well its better than. I'll sing you a song it aint very long its all about a big murder an old bull dog jumped a bullfrog and the story dont go no further. And remember you eat to live not live to eat

08-01-2005, 05:36 PM	#17 (permalink)
HighHopes Groupie Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 4	I bet you are fat. All fat people are in denial..are you a closet fatty? The song was good like..I've written a similar number myself about getting wasted

08-08-2005, 04:27 PM	#18 (permalink)
groovalistikmusic Groupie Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: alabama Posts: 1	it's coll