Brando's Songwriting: Mr. Dreamer (Critiques Welcomed!)
 

Hello everyone, I just wanted to share a song that I've recently finished, called "Mr. Dreamer". The lyrics tell a story about chasing after desires through these personifications, "Lady Love" and "Mr. Dreamer."

I've always been a person to embrace spontaneity and new direction when the opportunity arises in my life, so I was wondering if it can be heard through these notes and lyrics.


Trying to hold my breath,
Heating up from the drum beneath my chest
I'm feeling alive
Chasing after lights on the wild side


Hold my hand through the dark
I'm caught in the motion of my heart
So Mr. Dreamer take me home
And Lady love, don't let me go


Starting with something new
Turn back, 'cause I'm coming after you
Looking around to see
Can't tell if your looking back to me


Hold my hand through the dark
I'm caught in the motion of my heart
So Mr. Dreamer take me home
And Lady love, don't let me go


Twenty steps from the gold
freaking out but you whisper to my soul
I hate this part
Staring eyes, oh you had me from the start


Hold my hand through the dark
I'm caught in the motion of my heart
So Mr. Dreamer take me home
And Lady love, don't let me go


Thank you again all very much for reading, and please leave feedback if you have anything to say! :) If you're interested in hearing it with song, you can also find it at https://soundcloud.com/brando_music-1/mr-dreamer