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Thatsthedreamuy 11-27-2014 06:13 PM

Fix things (pop)
 
Hey, I've never been too worried about my lyrics, but seeing posts here has made me think again 'bout that. Please tell me whatever you think I might improve.

I've let my entire
Life in a desire
That will never be fullfilled
And rage has taken control of me now

Things started so well
For us
So well that I went to screw everything
Up and now I feel like I'm

In a
Sea of troubles where I keep the
Biggest regret that I've ever had
But it's time to fix things

I know
what I did was stupid and wrong
I can't control myself from time to time
I'll try my best to fix things

One minute I'm in the
Top and in the next one
I'm all alone and wondering
What is really wrong with me

I couldn't find the source of this course
Nor could how this could get any worse
And here I come feeling like I'm

In a
Sea of troubles where I keep the
Biggest regret that I've ever had
But it's time to fix things

I know
what I did was stupid and wrong
I can't control myself from time to time
I'll try my best to fix things

Yeah I'll only rest when everything is fixed

I'll try my best to fix things


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