Never Flowers (a poem)
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Take hold, And rip: Keep ripping, until All you see it Dust; Nothing human here - No sorry words, No sympathy. If you know me, Why forsake me? But you Could never tell: Your hands are clean, Where mine Are not. You are so in your own heard, How does it not burst your eardrums When you speak? Sharp fingernails And cracked palms; Still beautiful. Cut quicker, And notice: There is less pain, And more Blood; An aftermath to crave Until I fall. You have no idea who I am! You hardly speak to me, Except to say: You wish I would stop; Never. Forget this, And all I ever say - Nothing will come of it; All will continue, And I shall hurt. Rip out throats, So dry, And hoarse from screaming Nothing. Hate me, And tear; Keep tearing, until All you hear is Love; Nothing suspicious here - No broken words, No torn-up lives. If you knew me, Why bring me knives? Never flowers. Never that. |
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