tell me what u think please! (house, single, band, song)

angel18 · 07-12-2005, 11:45 AM

okay i need a bit of help here. i don't know what to name the second song (i would love some suggestions).

Cries and Whispers

Hope and desire are all we need
even when things are not what they seem
Hopes and fears are all we ever see
We made a contract in a field of snow

A single release now, and he's saying
Out of the woods and trees, across the rain
From out of the nighttime, somebody screams
He's on his way somewhere, like he's been nowhere
I don't know, nobody knows
I don’t know, nobody knows

Small girl is lost here on a frozen floor
what do they want with her?
What do they want with her?
I don't know, nobody knows
I don’t know, nobody knows
nobody even tries to find out what they want to know

Somewhere out there, is a man
He walks along a road in the purring rain
He wants to find out what they know
About his little girl
He wants to know, but nobody knows
He wants to know, but nobody knows

He thinks about when she was born
She was the most beautiful thing in the world
She had bright blue eyes and brown golden hair
He never wanted to leave at all
But then the call came and he had to go

Now he searches for his little girl
He wants to know how she’s grown up
He wants to meet and greet his little girl
Even though some things have changed
He wants to know, but nobody knows
He wants to know, but nobody knows

(second song)

I can’t help but wonder why I was brought here
I was among people I didn’t know, or like
Why I can’t help but be on my own,
It’s not like I’m afraid, it’s just I don’t know anyone,
I’d rather be back home, where I belong.
But I’m here the place I truly hate
The place where it happened all that time ago
A place I will never go to again
I don’t want to have to come back here.

Help me, oh help me please
I want to find myself and who I am
Help me, oh help me please
I want to find myself and who I am.

I feel so hopeless about the future
And what it will bring, depending on where it ends
I sit in a house where I know people love me
But they don’t seem to realise how I’m feeling
I wonder if I’ll ever move on in my mind
I feel stuck in a moment I can’t get out of
How much I’d like to go and see things I will never see
If I stay among the things that frighten me so much.

Help me, oh help me please
I want to find myself and who I am
Help me, oh help me please
I want to find myself and who I am.

Mr Slogan · 07-19-2005, 11:51 AM

I LOVE THE FLOW U GOT GOING HERE
I'm a musician and could put music to this piece right here.
I can re-late- cuz i would write something just like it
but in my own Sloganized form
very breathe taking
i like it
keep it up

angel18 · 07-19-2005, 12:24 PM

thanx man i like the fact u like it cos ur stuff is amazing man

07-12-2005, 11:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	tell me what u think please! okay i need a bit of help here. i don't know what to name the second song (i would love some suggestions). Cries and Whispers Hope and desire are all we need even when things are not what they seem Hopes and fears are all we ever see We made a contract in a field of snow A single release now, and he's saying Out of the woods and trees, across the rain From out of the nighttime, somebody screams He's on his way somewhere, like he's been nowhere I don't know, nobody knows I don’t know, nobody knows Small girl is lost here on a frozen floor what do they want with her? What do they want with her? I don't know, nobody knows I don’t know, nobody knows nobody even tries to find out what they want to know Somewhere out there, is a man He walks along a road in the purring rain He wants to find out what they know About his little girl He wants to know, but nobody knows He wants to know, but nobody knows He thinks about when she was born She was the most beautiful thing in the world She had bright blue eyes and brown golden hair He never wanted to leave at all But then the call came and he had to go Now he searches for his little girl He wants to know how she’s grown up He wants to meet and greet his little girl Even though some things have changed He wants to know, but nobody knows He wants to know, but nobody knows (second song) I can’t help but wonder why I was brought here I was among people I didn’t know, or like Why I can’t help but be on my own, It’s not like I’m afraid, it’s just I don’t know anyone, I’d rather be back home, where I belong. But I’m here the place I truly hate The place where it happened all that time ago A place I will never go to again I don’t want to have to come back here. Help me, oh help me please I want to find myself and who I am Help me, oh help me please I want to find myself and who I am. I feel so hopeless about the future And what it will bring, depending on where it ends I sit in a house where I know people love me But they don’t seem to realise how I’m feeling I wonder if I’ll ever move on in my mind I feel stuck in a moment I can’t get out of How much I’d like to go and see things I will never see If I stay among the things that frighten me so much. Help me, oh help me please I want to find myself and who I am Help me, oh help me please I want to find myself and who I am.

07-19-2005, 11:51 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mr Slogan Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Dirty South, Marrero/New Orleans. LA Posts: 22	I LOVE THE FLOW U GOT GOING HERE I'm a musician and could put music to this piece right here. I can re-late- cuz i would write something just like it but in my own Sloganized form very breathe taking i like it keep it up

07-19-2005, 12:24 PM	#3 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	thanx man i like the fact u like it cos ur stuff is amazing man