Critique please B)

System Initial: · 08-21-2015, 04:46 AM

bag of crack 22 guns
sacrificial mind of the first born son
voodoo fingers 1000 tons
split in the head what have you done

scraping dirt from iron flood drains
flushing tablets and bloodied piss stains
looking in the mirror with no one to blame
id blame myself but i dont know my name

black trade system constellations
calling out from something inside
corpses soul is back with her
no lie no lie bitch taking it

don't save me, please save me
killing confusion death seller execution

black snake and cocaine
five point circle enduring pain
joanna

08-21-2015, 04:46 AM	#1 (permalink)
System Initial: Groupie Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 2	Critique please B) bag of crack 22 guns sacrificial mind of the first born son voodoo fingers 1000 tons split in the head what have you done scraping dirt from iron flood drains flushing tablets and bloodied piss stains looking in the mirror with no one to blame id blame myself but i dont know my name black trade system constellations calling out from something inside corpses soul is back with her no lie no lie bitch taking it don't save me, please save me killing confusion death seller execution black snake and cocaine five point circle enduring pain joanna