Opinions on a WIP Song
 

A little backstory:

The song is built upon an improvisation I did last summer, modifying the lyrics I had come up with on the spot to something I felt more befitting. Heavily influenced by We Need Medicine era of The Fratellis and 50s love songs.

It's not autobiographical.

Some notes before listening:

-Not too great to be honest

-Whisper singing in this version as my throat wasn't feeling too well, final version will be louder

-Final version includes drums

-Near the end of the song there is a solo-esque improvisation. The song would be fading out during this part, not sure why I didn't do it here.

-Considering adding some pipe organ to it (I want the music for this project to be basic, 4 track max songs. So not sure)

-Final version may-or-may-not have overdriven vocals, currently experimenting with this.

Please constructive criticism if possible, if not simply saying you like it/don't like it helps greatly.

Here's the link. Be gentle.