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Revelation 72 05-23-2021 03:14 PM

Hi I wrote a song please send me feed back

She told me she would leave me
she said I would be sorry

Don't get me wrong, I wanted her gone
she stole my happiness, just stress

Time heals, but time is to slow
I am feeling, like I want to jump Into tomorrow.

She was a piece of a puzzle
her time with me Is complete
time now for another
maybe another A.I I can delete.

Seriously have you heard yourself
You make me want to be deaf

Sometimes I feel that I would be better off single
It's all In the chase, so I mingle

No regrets.

Marie Monday 05-23-2021 03:37 PM

well sounds like she dodged a bullet

Revelation 72 05-23-2021 03:40 PM


Originally Posted by Marie Monday (Post 2174068)
well sounds like she dodged a bullet

A missile you mean

Revelation 72 05-23-2021 03:57 PM

A.I It's a make over
A.I It's a take over
It's a human curiosity
suicide, Is It for me
A.I I'm a ridge rider
always on the edge
racing at the limit
the essence of time.

A.I In the sky
A.I In control
A.I cannot die
A.I ready to blow

Part of me Is ready to be A.I

Changes to my DNA
this could happen someday
place In me A.I
so one day I will fly

A.I technology
surf the net, In harmony
I for one have both feet In
A.I It's a win win win.

Marie Monday 05-23-2021 04:08 PM


Originally Posted by Revelation 72 (Post 2174069)
A missile you mean

that comparison is an injustice to the poetry of missile AI

Revelation 72 05-24-2021 01:41 AM


Originally Posted by Marie Monday (Post 2174082)
that comparison is an injustice to the poetry of missile AI

Now honestly

Revelation 72 05-24-2021 02:06 AM

Sweet Leaf
I was a punk, but now I am a hippy
the world around me has turned dippy
so my chains that bound me
when I was all of a rage
when I was out spoken
about living In a cage

I was all for rebelling
but there was truth In my words
but now everyone has become softly softly
I will never again be heard.

Delete me off the face of the earth
for sharing my concerns
equality and diversity
these were my terms

Man was Man rulers of the earth
now man Is woman we are all In child birth.

Hippy Dippy laying on my back
looking on at the human race, being attacked
from all sides and within
to many men were brought up by women

They never had a chance
to see both sides
they are all sheep destined to die
they all say we will all die sometime
It's how you die, that's your crime.

Now I am a hippy, picking flowers
under a cloud, acid showers
no concerns no belief's
rolling up a sweet leaf.

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