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marilynmansonlover 07-12-2013 06:52 PM
want some feedback on these lyrics
 
inbox me what you think

Anti-social Living
People call me useless people call me strange.
I like to think of myself being an ABSTRACT painting
Silver bullets , making deep holes in my soul.
i locked my self away, being far from the anticipation of the word ‘normal
Somewhere dark i thought
Someplace cold
Where i could be alone in the darkness
Call it weird , i call it antisocial living.

:finger:

butthead aka 216 07-12-2013 07:00 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by marilynmansonlover (Post 1343645)
inbox me what you think

Anti-social Living
People call me useless people call me strange.
I like to think of myself being an ABSTRACT painting
Silver bullets , making deep holes in my soul.
i locked my self away, being far from the anticipation of the word ‘normal
Somewhere dark i thought
Someplace cold
Where i could be alone in the darkness
Call it weird , i call it antisocial living.

:finger:

hmmm its a little abstract and strange. just kind weird.

Trollheart 07-15-2013 05:29 PM
Why have you posted in the soundtracks sub-forum??? :confused:

Alice in Chains 07-15-2013 05:39 PM
I'm wondering the same as Trollheart.

But I also read the lyrics and honestly, they're a little mediocre. I don't know where you drew inspiration from or how passionate you are about it, man, so that's just constructive criticism. I just think it sounded more like poetry than lyrics.

moyalico 08-07-2013 09:55 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Trollheart (Post 1345145)
Why have you posted in the soundtracks sub-forum??? :confused:
good quition....
:shycouch:


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