cardboard adolescent

do you not like the new beat or do you think the transition is too rough? i personally thought it fit the riffing a bit better.

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loose_lips_sink_ships

I just thought the transition was kinda rough......other then that its fine

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cardboard adolescent

time to pimp my sh!t some more,
i uploaded three new songs
(HERE: MySpace.com - The Incredible Flying Torture Orchestra - CHICAGO, Illinois - Experimental / Concrete / Healing & EasyListening - www.myspace.com/tifto)
despite the fact that i was planning
on giving them vocals and incorporating them into
some sort of overly ambitious concept album.

i figured instead i'd put them out there and
see if they garnered any positive feedback.
(that's where you come in)

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Lizzie

Okay, I've always ignored this thread, 'cause I never felt like actually listening to it
But I actually really liked your songs on your myspace

Of your new ones, Severely Fragmented was probably my favorite, I just though that the overall effect of it was pretty cool and random
I liked Bach Bloody fingertips, but really hated the intro bit


But I must say, I am impressed

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sleepy jack

Bach's Bloody Fingertips: It was nice but I kind of feel like the outro was a bit of a let down. Like it just sort of trailed off, maybe if you had like a giant crash or explosion of music or some sorts? I don't know.

Severely Fragmented: I didn't finish listening to this because it's not really my thing. Too scary =X but I got like a minute and a half in before stopping and the guitar (I think its a guitar) distorted noises sounded cool.

Her Majesty: I think this one was definitely my favorite, I really liked it.

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cardboard adolescent

yea, bach's bloody fingertips is kind of anti-climactic and has a very slow opener (torture is part of the point) so needs some improvement.

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ProggyMan

Her Majesty is certainly your best.

Jesus Is Alive I like to.

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She's good to me
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She's a pretty thing
And she knows everything
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Lizzie

mmhmm, That one was probably my least favorite song on there
It just seemed rather dull to me, not nearly as good as the other songs

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pheurton

Could you possibly hook me up with a d/l?

cardboard adolescent

of course, for any song in particular?

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