(I need you opinion because I'm a freshmen, and I need to be a jr or a senior to take a creative writing class but my teacher had asked him to put me in his class next year. He needs some of my writing to see if I'm good enough right now. Please help comment good and bad? THANKS)
Walking down the hall,
Going into the classroom,
Sitting at my desk,
Thinking to myself.
Trying to write this paper,
Getting all the lyrics out of my mind,
And put on the paper,
Making my thoughts come to life.
Is this really my life,
Or is it just a dream,
Is it reality or just a thought in me,
Thinking so hard,
Starting to get a migraine,
Writing so fast,
Starting to burn my hand.
Come on,
I got to get this done,
Hopefully this isn't a phase,
This has to be good,
Its time to choose,
Which way I want to go.
Do I want to be a writer,
Or what do I want to do,
These lyrics will answer the question,
I have for you.
I'm still sitting there,
With nothing on my paper,
What just happened,
That page was full.
I'm trying to figure out,
What I wrote,
I'm so confused,
I don't know whats happening in reality.
It doesn't make since,
It all felt so real,
The migraine is still there.
But the burn on my hand,
Had something writen on it,
I don't understand the language,
It looks as if it was greek to me,
But really all it said,
Is that you will soon find out what you want to be.
Undoubtable is the passion in me,
All of the sudden I look down at the paper,
Theres what I had written unconsciously,
Now I know,
Exactly what I want to be......
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02-18-2011 06:49 PM