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Creation Date: 01-30-2009 03:11 PM

the-hippy

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hi guys baisicly im using this blog to put some of the songs i have writen i could really do with feedback

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#2 02-01-2009 02:33 PM
Can do better now I’m sat here all by my self, your dancing with someone else Now iv got to find a way to, to get you back now Cant you see I’m slipping away I know you can do better, but not for much longer. You can do better of this I know But your making me afraid, making me afraid That your being pulled away from me By someone else Cant you see He may be a charmer but When his friends come Its like a kick in the gut He will leave you His friends come first I know you can do better How am I supposed to live If I let him take you from me I just want to spin you around girl Spin you around And tell you of your mistake Your making You can do better of this I know But your making me afraid, making me afraid That your being pulled away from me By someone else Cant you see Here I am Sat here by my self I don’t know if I can take it To think of you f*ing …Him How could you choose him over me You can do better Girl you can do better Now if you don’t mind I’m going to hide in a closet now You can do better of this I know But your making me afraid, making me afraid That your being pulled away from me By someone else Cant you see The little f*er cant act his age even for you Even for you And he says he loves you But I don’t think that’s true Cant you see That you can do better But your still slipping away from me Because you just want to make him happy Remember there’s somebody else Maybe you could try Maybe just for one day You could help me stay sane You can do better of this I know But your making me afraid, making me afraid That your being pulled away from me By someone else Cant you see Now I’ll sit here by my self You’ll want to dance with someone else I’ve got to find a way to To stay away
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2 Responses to "my first ever song"

#2 11-22-2013 11:51 PM

Dougdenslowe Says:

Your a good songwriter.May I ask why you posted your songs here instead of at the regular songwriting part of the site?Just curious!

#1 01-14-2011 12:48 PM

sarahdmoore Says:

For a fourteen-year old kid who writes incredible songs, you really have big chances of making it on the real music industry someday. Just develop your talent and continue what you are doing. Be inspire and dream big!

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