Fuzzy Logic - My first EP

Plainview · 12-10-2014, 07:14 AM

I know self-made music doesn't get an awful attention on here, but I thought my first EP might interest you. I guess it's a sort of experimental electronic thing, but their are elements of jazz, psychedelia, and rock in there too. I'd really appreciate you giving it a listen and leaving some feedback. All created through various self-created recordings and loops, pieced together like a jigsaw puzzle on the computer to reach the final result. Thanks!
https://soundcloud.com/the-deaf-aids/sets/fuzzy-logic

Mr.Cramming · 12-10-2014, 07:35 AM

Hi there, Painview.

Actually, I really connect to such electronic genres, but I think you should emphasize in your songs more the melody rather than the drums and the groove (which is very dissonant, meaning it might sound to a lot of people not convenient). I think you should also learn a little more about how to work with musical production via computer programs, as it sounds (perhaps I am wrong) that you're very experienced with this.

Psychedelic music is good, but I would suggest to add a little bit of commercial vibe into this.

Plainview · 12-10-2014, 07:42 AM

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Originally Posted by Mr.Cramming

Hi there, Painview.

Actually, I really connect to such electronic genres, but I think you should emphasize in your songs more the melody rather than the drums and the groove (which is very dissonant, meaning it might sound to a lot of people not convenient). I think you should also learn a little more about how to work with musical production via computer programs, as it sounds (perhaps I am wrong) that you're very experienced with this.

Psychedelic music is good, but I would suggest to add a little bit of commercial vibe into this.

Thanks for the comment. I agree, melody is not my strongest area as of yet, I'm a sucker for interesting rhythms. I guess the dissonant sounds will probably be off putting for some, but I'm not too worried about that. And yes, I need to gain some greater understanding of the various software used, as this really my first time trying something like this. A commercial sound is honestly not a route that bothers me too much, I'm not making for that, but I can see you're point about this being unappealing to a certain type of listener. I'm glad you took the time to have a listen! Cheers.

Mr.Cramming · 12-10-2014, 07:49 AM

It's actually intriguing for me to listen to innovative sounds. I have heard your other songs, I think that your best songs so far are "Turning (In My Sleep)" and "Melodysplastic". Try to combine more genres with those psychedelic sounds, which I really like.

Plainview · 12-10-2014, 07:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Mr.Cramming

It's actually intriguing for me to listen to innovative sounds. I have heard your other songs, I think that your best songs so far are "Turning (In My Sleep)" and "Melodysplastic". Try to combine more genres with those psychedelic sounds, which I really like.

Thanks again. Yeah, I think the psychedelic vibe is a strong point actually. I definitely want to incorporate it in other ways, so that's a good idea!

Mr.Cramming · 12-10-2014, 07:56 AM

Hey, posting here just because maybe you didn't notice that yet, but I sent you a PM.

Plainview · 12-10-2014, 08:04 AM

I did. Did you get my reply?

12-10-2014, 07:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
Plainview ⁣ Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 721	Fuzzy Logic - My first EP I know self-made music doesn't get an awful attention on here, but I thought my first EP might interest you. I guess it's a sort of experimental electronic thing, but their are elements of jazz, psychedelia, and rock in there too. I'd really appreciate you giving it a listen and leaving some feedback. All created through various self-created recordings and loops, pieced together like a jigsaw puzzle on the computer to reach the final result. Thanks! https://soundcloud.com/the-deaf-aids/sets/fuzzy-logic

12-10-2014, 07:35 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mr.Cramming Groupie Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 18	Hi there, Painview. Actually, I really connect to such electronic genres, but I think you should emphasize in your songs more the melody rather than the drums and the groove (which is very dissonant, meaning it might sound to a lot of people not convenient). I think you should also learn a little more about how to work with musical production via computer programs, as it sounds (perhaps I am wrong) that you're very experienced with this. Psychedelic music is good, but I would suggest to add a little bit of commercial vibe into this.

12-10-2014, 07:49 AM	#4 (permalink)
Mr.Cramming Groupie Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 18	It's actually intriguing for me to listen to innovative sounds. I have heard your other songs, I think that your best songs so far are "Turning (In My Sleep)" and "Melodysplastic". Try to combine more genres with those psychedelic sounds, which I really like.

12-10-2014, 07:56 AM	#6 (permalink)
Mr.Cramming Groupie Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 18	Hey, posting here just because maybe you didn't notice that yet, but I sent you a PM.

12-10-2014, 08:04 AM	#7 (permalink)
Plainview ⁣ Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 721	I did. Did you get my reply?