Dogwoods and Melancholia (lyrics, quote, songs)

The Dave · 04-13-2007, 06:27 PM

Meh, it's not that good, probably could be loads better.

Dogwoods and Melancholia

Meet me in the back of the field
At the fence where we first
Fell for each other.
I come here daily, thinking I'll see
Those pale blue eyes echoing
Every promise I've made to them.
The tulips that once paved the way
Are now brown and dry and
That little dove that used to visit
Never has come home.
I showered this field with water
And with time but it's still lacking
That secret ingrediant that I
Ran out of when you ran out from me.
Meet me in the back of the field where
You'll see me laying against the
Same old Dogwood.
That same old Dogwood were we first
Carved our love into this world with
A knife and an unspoken promise.
So please come to the back of the field,
I promise that I'll make my echoes
Mean something this time.

Crowe · 04-16-2007, 02:22 AM

Stop stealing Crowquill's songs.

The Dave · 04-16-2007, 07:28 AM

Nah, if it was Crowquill's, I would've been carving letters into my arm and not a tree.

zak · 04-16-2007, 04:10 PM

That was mean...Though i did like the lyrics. Awesomeness

Crowe · 04-17-2007, 01:05 AM

Lol Touche!

**sleepy jack** · 04-17-2007, 01:21 AM

It was one bad line..<.<

The Dave · 04-17-2007, 08:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowquill

It was one bad line..<.<

Bah, I swear I've seen that same thing in another one of your poems, though the other poem was rather old, I think it was back in the fall when I saw it.

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04-13-2007, 06:27 PM
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,887	Dogwoods and Melancholia Meh, it's not that good, probably could be loads better. Dogwoods and Melancholia Meet me in the back of the field At the fence where we first Fell for each other. I come here daily, thinking I'll see Those pale blue eyes echoing Every promise I've made to them. The tulips that once paved the way Are now brown and dry and That little dove that used to visit Never has come home. I showered this field with water And with time but it's still lacking That secret ingrediant that I Ran out of when you ran out from me. Meet me in the back of the field where You'll see me laying against the Same old Dogwood. That same old Dogwood were we first Carved our love into this world with A knife and an unspoken promise. So please come to the back of the field, I promise that I'll make my echoes Mean something this time. __________________ My collection,winkwinkcoughcough

04-16-2007, 02:22 AM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 689	Stop stealing Crowquill's songs. __________________ My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

04-16-2007, 07:28 AM
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,887	Nah, if it was Crowquill's, I would've been carving letters into my arm and not a tree. __________________ My collection,winkwinkcoughcough

04-16-2007, 04:10 PM
zak Groupie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 19	That was mean...Though i did like the lyrics. Awesomeness

04-17-2007, 01:05 AM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 689	Lol Touche! __________________ My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

04-17-2007, 01:21 AM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,206	It was one bad line..<.< __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.