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Old 02-20-2011, 11:49 AM   #52 (permalink)
The Fascinating Turnip
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Right, I suppose some feedback should start flooding through. Here goes some:

I quite liked The Accidental, even if it did remind me of some sort of horrible attempt at making something mordant and cutting edge in the beginning. I'm glad that feeling faded away, it ended up being rather good. I enjoyed how it started to rely a bit more on humour. Perhaps it was even poking fun at the kind of play I mentioned before.

The Case Of People Who Have Too Much Time On Their Hands was also rather great. Interesting concept and a nice touch of humour.

The Comatorium bothered me a bit because although it was well written everything seemed a bit obvious and the title made it even more so. I felt it was sort of a waste of decent writing, I believe.

...More to come.
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