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cardboard adolescent · 07-29-2011, 11:15 AM

I like it, the only thing I don't like is the use of 'upon,' feels a little weird. But otherwise I really like it. Flows well.

07-29-2011, 11:15 AM	#2 (permalink)
cardboard adolescent ;) Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: CA Posts: 3,503	I like it, the only thing I don't like is the use of 'upon,' feels a little weird. But otherwise I really like it. Flows well.