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neverasitseems · 11-24-2011, 01:48 PM

I have to agree with Odyshape. If you were to add more specific feelings and/or experience it could be much better, more real. It's a good start, though.

11-24-2011, 01:48 PM	#4 (permalink)
neverasitseems Groupie Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 20	I have to agree with Odyshape. If you were to add more specific feelings and/or experience it could be much better, more real. It's a good start, though.