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Old 05-19-2012, 05:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Not bad. It's hard to avoid being cliche with love songs, but you did an okay job of that. Overall, I'd give 'em a 6 out of 10. I've only read the lyrics, though, so maybe when I listen to the songs, my opinion will change. Sorry I have nothing constructive to say. But I'd just like to say I'm moderately entertained by your lyrics, and would like to read more from you.

Thanks for posting.
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