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06-09-2010, 05:23 PM
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The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
Posts: 998
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GET YOUR BALLS BACK
You say you have fallen in love... But when is delusion too much. She's got her hand in your pants now... Making you a puppet, holy cow. And your manhood's under attack... Go get your balls... Shrunken, so small. Go get your balls... Go get your balls back. Boy, what did your momma tell ya... Don't you be playing with fire. Look both ways when you cross the street... Get the hell out, you can't stand the heat... How's it feel, with an empty sack? Go get your balls... Stand up, don't crawl. Go get your balls... Go get your balls back. You are trash... Used for cash... Got no nuts... Got no guts... Got this slut... Had enough? When will you toughen... Up! Your woman is a vampire... Let her bite, as you cry her... To sleep, now's your chance, run away. Leave this hell you live everyday. Freedom gotchu high like crack. Go get your balls... Shrunken, so small. Go get your balls... Don't lose it all. Go get your balls... Stand up, don't crawl. Go get your balls back... Go get your balls back... Bitch!
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06-10-2010, 08:03 PM
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The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
Posts: 998
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Holy arsenal...
Jesus as a weapon. It's phemonenal... The way they can take... This beautiful concept... And make it a deathtrap. Sympathy they've felt... Manifests itself... Into grief dealt. Holy warfare... Ironic decimation. Hate labeled as peace... A demonic feast... In the name of God.
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05-26-2012, 04:34 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Norway
Posts: 178
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I especially like the lines: "The way they can take... This beautiful concept... And make it a deathtrap." They create a brutal contrast, and paints images in my head (not very peaceful images, though). Personally, I would have written it more like this: "The way this beautiful concept becomes a deathtrap" ...or something like that. It creates a more dramatic and drastic change of mood. But that's just my thoughts. Other than that, the only thing I can comment is that it's, as said before, pretty straight forward. I would personally like a text about religion without using the words "God", "Holy warfare" and such. But again, that's just my opinion. I'll read more of your lyrics soon. Sorry for not commenting earlier, I've been very stressed out lately 
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06-03-2012, 11:03 AM
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The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
Posts: 998
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Lol. Those might be the only good lines in that one. I might take those lines and do something else with them, now that I think of it. And I actually had it written something like that in the first place, and I like it better how it is now. Not trying to shoot down your idea... just saying. It is straight-forward, but it doesn't bother me much. I said what I wanted to say. And I do have some lyrics in here that talk about God without being so blunt, such as... well... "God?" No need to apologize. I'm just glad that you stopped by and had a look. Keep writing, buddy. Quote:
And what exactly do you think this music is? lol. Sometimes I'm not even sure. Not to brag, but alot of what I write comes naturally... not a hell of alot of work goes into it.
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07-15-2010, 05:07 AM
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The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
Posts: 998
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Why can't I write?... I've been unable to write a single thing for over a month now, though it honestly feels like longer.
I really want to write, but I just can't. I'm not a great lyricist, but I enjoy it and I came up with some good stuff from time to time, even just in the few months I was posting my shit here. Anyway, since we got some intelligent folks here, I was just wondering if anyone had any advice for someone suffering from "writer's block".
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07-16-2010, 05:10 PM
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The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
Posts: 998
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I got something. It's not that great, but atleast it's something. Not sure if they're both verses or a verse and a chorus yet.
Bitch slapping her heart And French kissing your pleasures Your lives, a castle of infinity Burned down by physical obscenities If you could see yourself Through all the red and black You'd try to save yourself And you'd never look back
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07-30-2010, 04:38 PM
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Still Crazy Nutso!
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: California, USA
Posts: 148
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07-24-2010, 11:49 PM
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The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
Posts: 998
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What continues to hold me here?
I will leave, that’s what I’ve said But after I’m done running the truth still lies near What continues to hold me here? Maybe it’s my feet, maybe my head Conscience driven by delusion and fear
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07-29-2010, 10:22 PM
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The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
Posts: 998
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LEECHES
VERSE 1: If you were alive You would reject this disease You’d fight with everything Fight with everything you’ve got CHORUS: Something need be done Before these leeches run All along the surface Dig into your skin To steal this blood That is not yours alone
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