Hi just looking for some feedback on some lyrics i put together, nothing big just spent about 10 minutes on it so let me know what you think
(to the instrumental of dance with the devil - immortal technique)
Yo, I might just seem like another MC but your tune will soon change once you listen to me, I ain't gonna rap about guns n heat, I ain't gonna rap about how it is on the street, you see I spit the truth up in this booth and when i hit the beat i knock you straight off your feet, the power of my lyrics will crush you like a grape, the force of my words could be mistaken for rape, now please don't think you ***gots can get away with dissin' me just because im following my dream with an epiphany cos i'll make you history, you'll feel less man than after having a vasectomy, I'll **** you up, cut you up, rip, tear, slash and burn you up then you might just give the **** up, stop your breathing, Im'a be like the Spanish inquisition to a poor heathen