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RollingChopper · 09-19-2012, 11:12 PM

It's pretty hard to rank a lyric completely without music behind it.

The lyric itself is pretty good, i would use more metaphores and be less literal.

In the other hand, you're pretty good. Good luck!

09-19-2012, 11:12 PM	#4 (permalink)
RollingChopper Groupie Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 24	It's pretty hard to rank a lyric completely without music behind it. The lyric itself is pretty good, i would use more metaphores and be less literal. In the other hand, you're pretty good. Good luck!