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Old 12-04-2012, 08:03 PM   #16 (permalink)
slappyjenkins
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The Song That Died

What happened to us?
What went wrong?
Our love has become a sigh
when it used to be a song

*I have a ton of these little guys. I wonder if I'm writing a larger poem, just over days and months and years instead of at one time. I'm gonna search through them and post a couple more, then I'm gonna get some ready to publish. (Early next year hopefully)
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