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Old 12-04-2012, 08:13 PM   #18 (permalink)
slappyjenkins
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Lightning

Can you see the blur?
Colors swirling in a beautiful world

Can you hear the crash?
Light and Sound doing
an eternal dance

All of these things seem quite strange
They give me feelings I can not explain

*this popped into my mind after a particularly close and powerful lightning strike...practically blew the dookie out of my shorts...
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