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Originally Posted by DontRunMeOver
As somebody said once before, please be brutal. In particular I'd like you to tell me which lines are boring and should be replaced.
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A scar across your wrist
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no. do not ever write about cutting. don't care if you do it or know someone who does. scar = beyond cliche
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