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kissrevenge · 06-06-2013, 03:26 PM

for a first time it is really nice writing the only thing id change is separation always sucks. Using the word sucks in poetry/lyrics does not flow very nice but other then that keep up the good work!

06-06-2013, 03:26 PM	#2 (permalink)
kissrevenge Groupie Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 4	for a first time it is really nice writing the only thing id change is separation always sucks. Using the word sucks in poetry/lyrics does not flow very nice but other then that keep up the good work!