smoldo56

Hi everyone! I like writing lyrics so I would like to show you something of my creation. Note that I am an amateur but accept criticism

This is one of my first lyrics..so here it is.

The Hardest Days (We Are Still Alive)

When I was young I believed
in the perfect pairs
words which they never say.

Sometimes we are losing
in the quiestions as
what is truth and what is lie

Maybe it are hardest days
you lied to me thousand times
but we are still alive

We are apart hundred miles
were stucked in a modern life.
Separation always sucks.

We thought we had a perfect plan
believing in amazing life
but we are still alive.

We are still alive
and here.

We are still alive
and here.

There are so many dreams
you can change to real.

kissrevenge

for a first time it is really nice writing the only thing id change is separation always sucks. Using the word sucks in poetry/lyrics does not flow very nice but other then that keep up the good work!

smoldo56

My Heart Is Beating For

We walked in one direction.
We listened to the same radio station
your voice, your kiss
our sleeples nights.
Some things that never change.
And this is all we need.

Our love, our love, our love
is I wanna only feel.
Your heart, your heart, your heart
I need to be where you are.

Hey baby why are you look around.
My heart is beating for
only you so everything is fine.
And some things never change.
And this is all we need.

Hey baby why are you look around.
Just hold my hands
we can dance and smile
we can everything.
And some things never change.
And this is all we need.

We experienced the same tension.
We were passing trought a similar mission
like a astronauts in the lonely space
nobody can´t stop that noise
it´s our minds.

Hey baby why are you look around.
My heart is beating for
only you so everything is fine.
And some things never change.
And this is all we need.

Hey baby why are you look around.
Just hold my hands
we can dance and smile
we can everything.
And some things never change.
And this is all we need.

smoldo56

Should Not Do It

Fun ends when they wanna know something that hard to say
I needed time to clean this mess inside my head
release all bad things which happend to me
going away from this dump better now than late.

But I should not do, should not do it
because one more thing
that help you is how to learn, how to learn love it
now.

Just because we broke up it doesn´t means
end, if you don´t just don´t stop and pay
fly so straight, high, without broken wings
go right way and something say.

But I should not tell, should not tell you
these shards will never get
never be stick together
right.

Because sometimes I feel like someone else
but after all I living and overcoming obstacles whoever I am.