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Old 07-27-2013, 09:16 AM   #5 (permalink)
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My other one was shit.

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She said, "What is it?"
"A hole," he replied.
"But what happened? How did it get here?"
"I don't know," he shrugged. "But watch your step."
"Will I fall in?"
"Only if it wants you."
"What does that mean?"
"I don't know," he shrugged. "Some things fall in and some things don't."
"May I drop something?" she asked.
"If you'd like."
"I'd like to see how far down it goes."
He shrugged. "Be my guest."

She laughed, "Some hole."
"It doesn't care much for keys," he mused.
"But why not? How does it choose?"
"I don't know," he sighed. "But it only takes what I love."
"Did you love someone?"
"Very much."
"What happened to them?"
"I don't know," he sighed. "She just fell in and never came out."
"Was she your wife?" she asked.
"My daughter."
"Have you tried falling in after her?"
He sighed. "Every day."
Holy **** WWWP. This is fantastic, I seriously love it. It reminds me very much of some of those older English Victorian authors... not any one specifically, just the general style of the period. Which is great, at least for me, because that's one of my favorite places and times for good writing.
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