Quote:
Originally Posted by CoolBec
To explain as best I can DJ, this is not a past love, we are still together and she (yes, she) presently knows me better than anyone else in this world because of our shared past. Make sense??
|
She knew you too well when she met you. That's why I feel that it should be past tense but it's your poem do as you like. :P
Just giving constructive criticism.
I used to have issues with switching tenses often throughout my work.