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Originally Posted by Blarobbarg
This is probably my favorite of all the poems you've posted so far. Personally, I actually prefer poetry that is rhythmic rather than rhyming. It may come from my love of percussion, I'm not really sure. Anyway, that's a non sequitor. Great work with this one, I love that it's a love poem, but takes a completely different direction that your other work.
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Glad you liked it B. As I've said before, my best muse is personal experience. It's always been difficult for me to get "poetic" about something unless I have strong feelings connected to it, so I guess that's why most of my stuff is about love...or lust..lol.
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Flower of Love
by Becky P.
The perfume of your arousal heightens my sense.
I want not wine; your fragrance looms
in the moment, rare...tense
Your flower blooms
Its petals tempt my amorous lips
Its crimson heart is radiant now with dew
Touched gently with fingertips
O flower of love! I give myself to you