the thing is its too straight forward. albeit very easy to relate to it doesnt necessarily have all that much depth. personally i like being able to read into things like poetry and song lyrics so i can expand on them and relate them not only to that subject matter and how it may relate to my life... but also i like to try and connect them to other feelings other emotions... it keeps the lyrics fresh and interesting... alive. maybe spice it up with some imagery... describe this evasive "thing" about this person. describe this past. is it crimson? living inside this person? does it show on the outside of this person?
describe this person. describe the feeling you get to see them in this way.
basically... show us your feelings.
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Never shall innocent blood be shed. Yet the blood of the wicked shall flow like a river. The three shall spread their blackened wings and be the vengeful striking hammer of God. In nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti.
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