Music Banter - View Single Post - Made a lyric and the song. Hope you like it

Mr.Cramming · 12-07-2014, 08:56 AM

Hi there, Razazy.

It is good to see that you're using synthesizing in your music, as it is a good tool for creating original material. But gotta admit, that I haven't sighted anything special in your song. It is a 4:22 song, which is not short at all. You wrote only a few lines for the song, and the bit is seemingly to be repetitive. If you make your lyrics sad, then you either try to combine them with a lot of melodies and harmonies, and as much words as possible, so the audience wouldn't get bored after one and half of a minute. I truly suggest you to slightly reform this song, and change it a little bit. Best of luck!

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Mr.Cramming Groupie Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 18	Hi there, Razazy. It is good to see that you're using synthesizing in your music, as it is a good tool for creating original material. But gotta admit, that I haven't sighted anything special in your song. It is a 4:22 song, which is not short at all. You wrote only a few lines for the song, and the bit is seemingly to be repetitive. If you make your lyrics sad, then you either try to combine them with a lot of melodies and harmonies, and as much words as possible, so the audience wouldn't get bored after one and half of a minute. I truly suggest you to slightly reform this song, and change it a little bit. Best of luck!