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Originally Posted by WritingWithRhythm
I like this. I'm not sure how I feel about all of the repeating, but that could turn out great with music. Your idea for how the song would turn out makes it sound like it could be enjoyable. Good job!
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Thanks! I think the repetition of lyrics could work, but it's always hard to strike a balance between conciseness and repetition (same with descriptiveness and wordiness). I'll keep your point in mind though. Cheers.