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Originally Posted by Crazy Luv
Okay, this time it made sense. you didnt go off to far.
it could of done better without the last stanza though. again, work on the ending.
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damn it.
Well at least this time no one has said cliche.
about the ending if you don't live in scotland you might not know but this poem is aimed at a group of scottish people called neds. They are violent and anti-social in other words thugs. For the ending it's about how they complain about getting the short end of the stick yet they only do violence an not actually try to change things.
(anyone find it quite ironic that you make it to hard to understand or it is too bland)