madeinNY

It lacks something, I need some HELPFUL critism...
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Kingdom of Mirrors
There's a comfort in the stuff that isn't light
'Cause you can't be seen or heard
No one cares what you've done
No one cares of who you are
Because they're all damned like you


You feel like you could just drop and sleep
Anywhere you wish
You could close your eyes and die

You can't float up
you can only float down
'Cause there's something pushing from the sky's
And pulling from the ground.

But it won't be too bad
the judgement is done
The others don't car of what you've done
They're all you
It's a Kingdom of Mirrors

There's a comfort in the stuff that isn't light
'Cause You can't be seen or heard
No one cares what you've done
No one cares of who you are...
Because they're all damned like you.
It's a Kingdom of Mirrors.

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Thanks Crazy for the lines in bold.

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