It's boring.
"Depending on what you did"
Doesn't fit at all, I suppose it makes sense, but it disrupts the flow.
The words are also bland, and it lacks imagery.
It looks more like a paragraph then a poem/song.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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