Don't get me wrong people, this is a great song. Even if nothing is changed this is definitely something that I would listen to. But the whole point of posting songs is to get real feedback on them and not just "that's great!"s all down the line. Even though this is great, every song I critique I try to give people some ideas of how they could change it in a positive way if they so wished. Also, even though if what I say doesn't help with the particular song I'm critiquing, it does give the author of it some ideas of how to approach the subject if they chose to write something like this again. If people have objections to that I'm sorry, but honestly I'm just trying to help.
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a bird does not sing because it has answers, a bird sings because it has a song
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