what I think is free-verse
and love?...
Dry your eyes
passing stranger,
some minutes have filled a life.
The rivers that cut
and mark these souls,
have hardened a diamond finish.
Hours that pass,
brief encounters
If She knew..."the innocent beauty,
would She weep the missed embrace...Vincent
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stuff about "Rain"
Come closer,
do you think of me
in your Winter rains,
grays touch the ocean.
Come sit,
my hands are warm
merely empty.
I reminisce,
incidental moments
remind me....you too?
the paths we walked are the same I`m sure,
void of our impressions.
Do you think of me
when the rains fall?
it`s been so long...
Well better go,
rain is passing.
Thought you might like to know
I think of you..
Rain is that way sometimes.
"question my abilities..never my heart"
© Copyright 2015 Lane Vincent
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The wood has grayed
many years of weather,
fighting Winter, July boils,
and the rain.
Comfort on the old back-steps
twisted some, but sturdy.
Dark clouds move across
lighter shades,
or is it the world moving around
charcoal splashes.
Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times.
I fought the day to bring me here,
the cold minutes spent alone...
no one to watch the rain.
"question my abilities..never my heart"
© Copyright 2011 Vincent
hey all i`m doing this song and just want thoughts on the verse..what might lead into this "chorus. its a bit country and if you need to hear something I can do that too. I`ll write the damn thing just need a push...a driction..thanks if you get here. Lane
the "Chorus
you take every little heartache you have ever had..
and then you stir in a life with love thats gone bad..
and all the little pieces that did not fit....ooooh
theres a man/girl with regret " [some mis-spelling its intentional]
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