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Old 02-19-2016, 01:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default what I think is free-verse

and love?...

Dry your eyes
passing stranger,
some minutes have filled a life.

The rivers that cut
and mark these souls,
have hardened a diamond finish.

Hours that pass,
brief encounters

If She knew..."the innocent beauty,
would She weep the missed embrace...Vincent

stuff about "Rain"
Come closer,
do you think of me
in your Winter rains,
grays touch the ocean.

Come sit,
my hands are warm
merely empty.

I reminisce,
incidental moments
remind too?
the paths we walked are the same I`m sure,
void of our impressions.

Do you think of me
when the rains fall?
it`s been so long...

Well better go,
rain is passing.
Thought you might like to know
I think of you..

Rain is that way sometimes.

"question my abilities..never my heart"

© Copyright 2015 Lane Vincent

The wood has grayed
many years of weather,
fighting Winter, July boils,
and the rain.
Comfort on the old back-steps
twisted some, but sturdy.

Dark clouds move across
lighter shades,
or is it the world moving around
charcoal splashes.
Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times.

I fought the day to bring me here,
the cold minutes spent alone...
no one to watch the rain.

"question my abilities..never my heart"

© Copyright 2011 Vincent

hey all i`m doing this song and just want thoughts on the verse..what might lead into this "chorus. its a bit country and if you need to hear something I can do that too. I`ll write the damn thing just need a push...a driction..thanks if you get here. Lane

the "Chorus

you take every little heartache you have ever had..
and then you stir in a life with love thats gone bad..
and all the little pieces that did not fit....ooooh
theres a man/girl with regret " [some mis-spelling its intentional]
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