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Old 01-08-2006, 09:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Givin' It A Try

Alrighty.
So, this is my first time puttin a song in here.
Im kinda nervous, but that is ok.
Here we go.

It has no title yet.
It is also incomplete, which is why Im putting it in here.
To get ideas on how to finish it.
This is most likely going to be done with a single acoustic guitar.
It is a "folky" song, or at least I want it to be.
It is missing something. I dont like the way some of it is worded.
Any help is appreciated.

here we go

I don't want to be around you
But at the same time, yes I do
Now you can see with your own eyes
All the choices I'm put through
But the drinkin' isnt helpin' cause I'm still so in love with you
I'll go walkin out the front door prayin' you'll let me come back through

How can you say its ok
That I'm tangled up in you
I'm leavin' in the morning
I thought you should know that we are through
I'll say all of my goodbyes then there is nothing left to do
I'll make my way out the back door just to come crawlin' back to you

I've been standing in the cold rain
Do you think you could let me in
Just don't mention last weekend
I dont want to get started on this again
'Cause no matter how good an argument it seems I never win
Then I'll make my way into your arms and we can....start all over again


ok, thats it.
It doesnt really have a solid ending which is something that I want to fix.
And, any suggestions for a title are appreciated.
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