either/or is here to once again comment on madein's songs. i liked it, first off. hahhaa is an alright dialogue if it's gonna be a laugh. maybe you should have them singing (i laugh). cept thats a bit lame. I like the use of the word lover. that word gets me going. in a lover sort of way
. damn poor girl wants to be more than friends. i liked the last line, it can sort of ring out or something yeah.