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Originally Posted by SittingBehindYou
In case I never tell you,
You were my one true love.
From the moment I met you,
I was lost in your eyes.
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In case i never tell you, you were my one true love...???...what will happen? You didnt finish it. you just left us hanging.
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If I forget to tell you,
I'll still be thinking of you.
And if I never see you agian,
I'll still be dreaming of you.
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trying to make it make sense, because the way you had it...didnt make sense.
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You fill my heart and cloud my thoughts.
The one true romance- I never thought i could have.
The longest dance- that was too short.
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i changed the had, because...didnt you have romance with him?
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At night I lie awake and wonder if you think of me.
Because my dreams of you always end to soon.
But I'm dying to wake up.
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okay...i thought you were lying awake. then all of a sudden you're saying because in your dreams..that means you're sleeping. this part confused me.
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You are the reason I smile, the reason I cry.
With you I'm trapped,
looking into deep, wonderous brown eyes
I was happy wild and free.
I smiled and laughed.
You are the one person,
who brings me to life.
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And in case I never tell you,
I love you.
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yea, this part needs work too. Maybe say
And in case i never tell you,
Still know i love you