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Originally Posted by hobojesus
Crazy you read my mind with the first part. The ending is too short, but I couldn't think of anything to put in the place of that, and also I think the line is great. Anything else would just ruin the line. With the second part, it shouldn't be fight to their death. It's supposed to refer to gladiatiors, where they 'fight to the death' because that's what happened in the dream.
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Yea, if you cant think of anything else to add to the ending, then just forget it, cause you dont want to force things on
yea, it makes more sense now that i know what it means & all(the
the not suppose to be a
their thing)