The first verse i didnt like, but as it went on, i grew to like it. now...
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Originally Posted by hobojesus
you-you held her hand and lead her inside/
you hit her down and opened her eyes wide/
this went on all night/
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you should had
she infront of
opened & behind
and. I think it would make more sense that way.
As i said, i like it, but i want to know what happens next...