Thematically stock and trade material -- there are no great ideas here. But it's good practice for if you decide to write about more interesting and less explored areas (no pun).
It has flow and gets the point across without being too cliché. The repetition at the end bothers me though. Overall I woud say upper-average. I think you can do better.
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