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The repetition at the end bothers me though.
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By that do you mean:
1. The line itself which is being repeated bothers you (i.e. that same line would bother you if it were only used once).
2. The fact that this line in particular was chosen to be repeated bothers you (you would have preferred a different line to be repeated).
3. The idea of repetition of ANY line in this situation bothers you.
Or something else? After I posted that one up today I had an idea about it - the repeated line in particular - and I was wondering if you were thinking the same thing.