I like it.
Upon a second and third look it is so very close to running into the cliche life is a lie, and I'm going to sing about existentialism ****e to hopefully incite thought into the impressionable (and sometimes ignorant) minds of the youth that I surround myself with.
I think the vocabulary used pulls it from that fate. Beee carefulllll - a clever acoustic part will save the song from any sort of doubt.
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