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Originally Posted by rubber soul
Keep running, even though your chest feels like it’s going to explode and your heart burst through it. (heart bursts)
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Actually, this part was fine the way it was. Since the heart hasn't actually burst through yet, "bursts" would be incorrect, though "will burst" or "is going to burst" would work. Same reason why the "explode" in the sentence isn't "explodes".
There are plenty of legit errors, though. Get on dat sh
it, TH!
Also, coincidentally enough, I wrote a story about a guy whose heart burst out of his chest a couple months ago. Needless to say, none of the mags were keen on it.
