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Originally Posted by hobojesus
The age old tale of tragedy...
From a great man comes a progedy
But the he doesn't live to see
what his creation will turn out to be
Under the circumstance
Everyone is displaced in a trance
tears of joy, they soon will pass
and sadness will prove to last
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Just some suggestions, not sure what you are going for though. I do like this one more than Bad name for jesus becaues god is a whore. Anti-Religion songs are hard to make them sound good.